Percussion in the intro detracted from the piece. Get rid of 'em and that might give you a fresh starting point to build up to your initial drop. Stuff in the middle was a bit hard to listen to. You've got a lot of subs going on, and over that all those effects had a lot of subs and lows as well. Try to get a better mix of lows mids and highs with each instrument filling a diff space.
Not bad.