lol
The chord progression reminds me of Hey Hey Ellen. Get some variety!
Also, I don't know what you are using to record. But it sounds like you are playing everything live. I recommend getting some sort of recording software and add more parts than the three voices you have going on (Keyboard, drums, vocals). You have the musical knowledge, up your game and get something good accomplished.
fix vocal mix
The vocals are too loud. You can tell when it sounds like you are blowing out the speakers. If you have the technology, turn down the gain.
Other than that, I enjoyed the piece. It was very fun and funny and fantastic. Europeans usually are :)
Digging it
Sympathy: feelings of pity and sorrow for someone else's misfortune.
Don't quite understand how the music conveys that, but I enjoyed the ostinato style fluff. Though a bit long and not enough variety to capture my attention the entire time. Change keys?
pretty fun
Your phrases are too long. Shorten them up by cutting chords tempos in half to keep the listeners attention. Cuz right now I'd not listen to this again. But the energy and "fun" factors were all there.
I know nothing about flash. I vote and review your flash on the premise of being creative, marketable, and/or just fucking entertaining.
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